a good animation! something nice to show to a social studies class in 5th grade studying this subject.
i would highly suggest to make it a LOT neater. the lines are crocked and made the animation look sloppy.
a good animation! something nice to show to a social studies class in 5th grade studying this subject.
i would highly suggest to make it a LOT neater. the lines are crocked and made the animation look sloppy.
Thanks for the advice, I truly appreciate it!
But I need to ask you to give me a few examples of where my lines were crooked.
for this to be your first animation surpassed my standards by a light year.
fantastic work
Thanks that really means a lot. Hopefully we learn much more later on...like a preloader T_T
oh god...i never thought a day would come where there is a song worse then "friday" itself.
also, url is messed up. fix it.
I Kinda fixed it. Now it redirects to the channel but newgrounds keeps adding a space randomly in the url I post in the description its pretty neato, but now the links wont work.
fantastic work here!
every single aspect.... just perfect
the story....the sounds...... the artwork....everything
just a tip though: make the lines straighter and neater.
thank you good sir, i appreciate the kind words
A beautiful parabola! hope you make more!
Thanks! There are 6 others available to check out, and more on the way!
wow!
loved the music, concept, and animation style to this! a very smooth animation and a beautiful one too!
i would love to see more from you!
Thanks, if you want to see more just go through my movies :)
not to bad!
Thank guy :3
for this to be don't on paper must have been tourture
and it came out pretty good!
good job!
eh, to transfer everything to the computer was torture. not the drawing/storyboarding/inking. i'm glad you enjoyed it though =D
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