AppleJack's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Refugee]

it is just exquisite. the story and the artwork was fantastic!
despite the poor quality, it was a bit legible, but the white lines were and exception. i think the problem was your cam.
also, for your future animations, put it sound.
so 9/10. great job, and hope to see more from you!

RedMarlin responds:

Thank you! I still have to practice getting the settings right for how everything is recorded, so hopefully my next animation will be a bit nicer-looking.

[The Pill]

for this being first flash, i must say, great job

[MineCraft]

not a bad filem, just improve voice acting, drawing skills, concept, and smoothness (by this i mean by improving FPS)
so 6/10. hope you make more flash films!

[Osama at sea]

good job, but could improve the length of vid and make it better quality.
but making a flash on the anniversary of osama's death..... you earned your self 10/10 5/5

straberrykiler6789 responds:

i could have made it longer but i am worried that people would have got bored of it quite soon so i made it short

[The First Borrower]

such a beautiful and artistic and creative animation!
i would suggest to make frame rate faster, take better quality pictures, and to take more pictures to make it more smooth.
i would like to see more from you in the future!

[Barney2012]

fantastic! such a ludicrous animation!!!

[1953-1964: Animated]

a good animation! something nice to show to a social studies class in 5th grade studying this subject.
i would highly suggest to make it a LOT neater. the lines are crocked and made the animation look sloppy.

utubedude8245onNG responds:

Thanks for the advice, I truly appreciate it!
But I need to ask you to give me a few examples of where my lines were crooked.

[ACS- Block: Act 1]

for this to be your first animation surpassed my standards by a light year.
fantastic work

8bitNemesis responds:

Thanks that really means a lot. Hopefully we learn much more later on...like a preloader T_T

[ZTV News Episode 1]

lol funny newscast!
but anyone see that building blow up after she talks about the ponies?

[Scarlett Johansson Nudes]

lola too funny